Tell the world that I was too sensitive, |
Curve-billed Thrasher
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I was surprised at how well the birds in Bill and Alice’s yard seemed to
get along. Three or four were often pecking simultaneously at different
sections ...
3 days ago
You're being very hard on yourself! But it's a good poem.
ReplyDeleteI can relate a wee bit.....'obtuse' is the adjective I'd pick, or how about 'too discerning' - stemming from the attitude you describe in the last line, an attitude I share (to a lesser extent).
Obtuse is a good word. Too discerning is a good phrase, too, but here it would sound like overt bragging and not as forthcoming as my posturings in the rest of the poem!
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