tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6568759.post7002525121259194733..comments2023-04-15T11:04:57.924-05:00Comments on The Rat Squeaks: Too SensitiveRon Southernhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08604305014713612990noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6568759.post-53926324521902939782010-02-17T19:17:06.151-06:002010-02-17T19:17:06.151-06:00Obtuse is a good word. Too discerning is a good p...Obtuse is a good word. Too discerning is a good phrase, too, but here it would sound like overt bragging and not as forthcoming as my posturings in the rest of the poem!Ron Southernhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08604305014713612990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6568759.post-9179912189000655912010-02-17T16:47:36.630-06:002010-02-17T16:47:36.630-06:00You're being very hard on yourself! But it'...You're being very hard on yourself! But it's a good poem.<br /><br />I can relate a wee bit.....'obtuse' is the adjective I'd pick, or how about 'too discerning' - stemming from the attitude you describe in the last line, an attitude I share (to a lesser extent).Twilighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14138621610593773784noreply@blogger.com